Hire someone to write dating profile
(It's a half-assed message that says my profile caught your eye.) I'm not so crazy about the IM option, either. In the subject line, most guys write "Hi" or "Hey," so at least add my user name.
Or write something like "Caring is creepy," because my profile says I like the soundtrack. It doesn't matter much what you say in your message.
If you wait too long, I might lose interest or start building expectations. Let me take the lead in revealing personal information, like where I live.
You don’t have to figure it out all on your own, though.
A study conducted by e Harmony and the writing app Grammarly says a man who has even two spelling mistakes in his profile is 14% less likely to receive a positive response from women.
Before you finish your profile, run it through a spell checker, have someone else look it over, watch out for the red squiggle, or do whatever you have to do to make sure you’ve crossed your t’s and dotted your i’s.
Make a connection based on something you noticed in my profile.
Say that of all the women you saw online, I'm the one who stood out.